hungry for lunch

gripping tightly to the the large tree, the monster climbed steadily onward toward the small creature he wanted to consume. his oversized arms were like a beekeepers body when covered in bees,  his beady eyes watched the mouse like creature, never looking down nor up. the small rodent looked up his tiny nose sniffing for more of the berries the monster had used for a trap. but the little creature did not realize the monster lurking in the corner of the top branch, and before it could Hesitate the monster scooped the rodent up and shoved it in his mouth.

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  1. Greetings from Western Australia Analie. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. Using a verb to start your text was a great strategy (but I would have liked a capital letter to start). Your careful choice of vocabulary made your text interesting to read, and easy to visualise. Remember to re-read, and edit – especially for punctuation, before you publish (or ask a friend to help you). I enjoyed reading your writing.🙏😊

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